http://killing-kurare.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] killing-kurare.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] evandar 2015-05-27 08:58 am (UTC)

Oooooh, I love it!! Yaaay :D Just last week I stumbled over the Meme and was wondering xD So again: Yaaaaaaaaaaaaay :D

This is exactly how I wanted it to be: playful, mutual, intimate ...
I love how you displayed their characters :) Your Bella always makes me smile ^^
The setting is beautiful, I can really imagine how they dance to the rain <3

"But it intrudes again, and Bella’s wild grin fades to her previous, dour expression, and Narcissa finds herself mourning its loss." Great sentence <3

"Incest is a sin she’ll let Bella carve onto her body as surely as she has her heart." Oooh, the devotion!!

"Bella is her world, and as her long, wicked tongue swipes over her clit for the first time, Narcissa’s world becomes one of pure pleasure." Perfect ending.

I enjoyed it very much and thank you thank you thank you!! :D

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