Oh my Gooood, that was perfect :D :D :D
I'm really new in this fandom and right now I'm devouring everything I can find, and who would've thought you wrote fics for it :3
And even a long one with my favourite character ^^ Yeah, Mello it is <3
However, I really love the flow of the fic. That you built it up the way it could really happen, with a little puzzle of who it's going to be, and awwwwwwwww, that last line killed me <3 <3 <3

I love this, very well done :)