Fic - Draco's Loss - 1/1

[evandar]

Title: Draco's Loss
Author: Evandar
Fandom: Harry Potter
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance
Pairings: Narcissa/Pansy
Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter and am making no profit from this story.
Summary: Pansy used to think Narcissa would be her mother-in-law.
Author's Notes: Written for the prompt Harry Potter - Narcissa/Pansy - mother-in-law on femslash100's Drabbletag5.



“I used to think you would be my mother-in-law,” Pansy says, slow and languid like the hand she trails down Narcissa’s side.

There’s smoke twisting up from the cigarette in her other hand; furling out of her mouth to form a blue halo around her black hair. It’s a disgusting habit, one that makes Narcissa wrinkle her nose every time, but she never complains. For all the stink, Pansy makes it stylish.

She thinks of Astoria: the pale, bland girl that her son decided on; compares her to Pansy’s angular, black bob and red-painted lips, and she smiles.

“Draco’s loss.”

Comments

[ultimate-cookie.livejournal.com]

I like it. It generates a strong and erotic feeling :)

[hikarievandar.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm glad you like it :)

[fresh-brainss.livejournal.com]

I think this is one of my favorite Harry Potter drabbles you've written! It's so gritty and erotic, with such gorgeous imagery,

[hikarievandar.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much! I was worried that I was out of practise with these, so I'm really glad you enjoyed reading it.

[killing-kurare.livejournal.com]

That was so amazing xD
I love that pair and you did an amazing job on them!
“Draco’s loss.”
Haha, indeed ^^

Thanks so much for sharing :D

[hikarievandar.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm glad you like it <3

I keep picturing adult!Pansy as Phryne Fisher (http://images6.fanpop.com/image/photos/35200000/Miss-Phryne-Fisher-miss-fishers-murder-mysteries-35200694-598-857.jpg) so yep! Draco's loss!

[killing-kurare.livejournal.com]

That's exactly what I had in mind reading your description :D
She's really beautiful <3