I have to admit, I was a sceptic of the prompt and the idea that Loki's children are Fury, Coulson and Darcy. It didn't seem to fit.
Still, I thought I'll read this fill of the prompt.
It was a good, very good decision.
Coulson here is so very calculating, cold, and you can literally *feel* his desire to rip his own uncle apart. But he's planning, knows that he would risk everything and waits. Patiently.
This Coulson IS Fenris and he IS dangerous. And Thor is so very naive, and doesn't see that there isn't a harmless mortal standing in front of him, but a very big vicious wolf that has never forgiven him. And probably never will forgive him. The first second it wouldn't have consequences Fenris would kill Thor.
It's great how Fenris still thinks about his mother, who loves them all, who tried to protect them, avenged them (at least a litte bit) and gave them a chance to live free on Midgard. How Frenris loves his siblings, the only two beings he can completely trust on Midgard. It's a lonely, fearful life they lead. And it's sad that they can never talk to their mother, because the risk is to high.
But the very, very best part was the description of what might happen when Odin finds them and comes to bind them again. Earth as "collateral damage". Nothing more. It's a chilling thought, because Fenris isn't joking.
Did I mention that I love Clint? And how competent he's here?
I would love to read a sequel with the Avengers, and maybe we'll see what happened with Loki. Because I'm firmly believe that something happened between Thor and Avengers.
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Date: 2012-06-29 01:34 am (UTC)From:Still, I thought I'll read this fill of the prompt.
It was a good, very good decision.
Coulson here is so very calculating, cold, and you can literally *feel* his desire to rip his own uncle apart. But he's planning, knows that he would risk everything and waits. Patiently.
This Coulson IS Fenris and he IS dangerous. And Thor is so very naive, and doesn't see that there isn't a harmless mortal standing in front of him, but a very big vicious wolf that has never forgiven him. And probably never will forgive him. The first second it wouldn't have consequences Fenris would kill Thor.
It's great how Fenris still thinks about his mother, who loves them all, who tried to protect them, avenged them (at least a litte bit) and gave them a chance to live free on Midgard. How Frenris loves his siblings, the only two beings he can completely trust on Midgard. It's a lonely, fearful life they lead. And it's sad that they can never talk to their mother, because the risk is to high.
But the very, very best part was the description of what might happen when Odin finds them and comes to bind them again. Earth as "collateral damage". Nothing more. It's a chilling thought, because Fenris isn't joking.
Did I mention that I love Clint? And how competent he's here?
I would love to read a sequel with the Avengers, and maybe we'll see what happened with Loki. Because I'm firmly believe that something happened between Thor and Avengers.
A wonderful story. :)
~silber