I'm a qualified English as a Foreign Language teacher IRL, and I'm running for an editing qualification as well. The occasional thing is fine - your English is great, from what I've seen so far. And besides: there're no mistakes you can make that my students haven't done already!
We really do seem to. I haven't read that one yet, though, so I'll give it a go. Thanks for the rec.
I think coming back to the quest and destroying the Horcrux was definitely a shining moment for him. His leaving, which was understandable, wouldn't really have had any huge consequences for him. Going back was an immense sacrifice for him and people do tend to forget that.
Hermione just bothers me. I think it's something about the way that she's written to always be correct at all times, regardless of the knowledge and experience of other characters. There are other reasons as well, but that's the main one.
Who knows? But maybe by Mastering Death, Harry can command it to destroy him as well as stay away. He's the master, so it's his choice. :p
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Date: 2014-05-10 06:59 pm (UTC)From:We really do seem to. I haven't read that one yet, though, so I'll give it a go. Thanks for the rec.
I think coming back to the quest and destroying the Horcrux was definitely a shining moment for him. His leaving, which was understandable, wouldn't really have had any huge consequences for him. Going back was an immense sacrifice for him and people do tend to forget that.
Hermione just bothers me. I think it's something about the way that she's written to always be correct at all times, regardless of the knowledge and experience of other characters. There are other reasons as well, but that's the main one.
Who knows? But maybe by Mastering Death, Harry can command it to destroy him as well as stay away. He's the master, so it's his choice. :p